【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 {: z5 H  o0 ?% m0 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- ^% q% g! [* x" B2 [! `Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 O+ R! H, ^$ V0 n& [' zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 a. q* L# E# Q: G9 N: h) w% gThe sky is happy down to its soul
  j7 s4 K8 V8 L& D1 WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. X( M' P: N. y& [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 o# K) m4 `3 n2 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 x5 `7 t5 D- H6 y+ UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) o0 ^( U! j9 s" z5 x' VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. d, v: I+ R# R- r9 y$ t) |; g0 {' DWith such a tongue as yours,
! |* H7 T) E0 v! UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; l7 J6 u) Z, P9 a4 N1 J" x# wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ M6 X+ k1 u+ V- L" n1 X* g& gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ w6 z, ?: Y. f. y% V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  f% {3 e8 J/ q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  H* Y8 r3 y% M$ v* h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& x0 X( I/ `* Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 U! q* x# k# v( V3 W$ g  m+ O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 K& k6 X5 U5 C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, x4 B9 U# I/ ^: ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ b: s4 C. A  I& a% i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 m  @, g2 s  J4 [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 `0 d5 ^$ n! z, T. h) `+ C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 p" o$ K9 C" E0 i$ b5 b$ E2 u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: c* ^, M1 ?7 g  S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 ^; J. v# l( Z4 u# [' H  S7 q" b$ T: C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 |/ G7 E# W# ?7 e: p: \6 F! ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ _& F$ ^5 }% ^$ X( T, v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ Y; A3 L5 n" {5 E' H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- ?7 w$ E, `/ s& v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( X4 X: R% @- k6 @6 y; y6 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ X/ A. k! |( [9 L: a* C4 y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- l9 @. K+ x: q6 R+ |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% N6 U' v  b' Z  k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# U6 v% J4 r# B, q, m; F6 l" x+ {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" M5 p1 l0 E! q& H' o% A  G2 B' {" v& r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 n+ B8 W. N! O* ?8 w2 m- I. M<P>I regret not dying</P>
. [4 g8 Y4 m$ E/ R2 u. p& w, e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 p7 c1 o7 j* |$ s* N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 {: G2 x6 ?; C; z7 q! ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" f# X8 d( A1 d/ G2 w# H- r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; b4 Z" W% C! h/ @' @0 m<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 s; o; L$ H3 m: H1 d8 x$ P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& G. F7 l3 J/ H7 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 P1 d, {$ i0 e& x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ p/ W5 z- D" C/ K1 A我请你剖开它
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6 t8 g  l' l& E) y9 H& Z! h7 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>