【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 R! m. q8 v) s6 N+ M我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 \$ H% _' S. R( w* G9 A. i0 c' K& yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" ]' X/ W/ \6 z! |From the first moment we met,
3 b2 [/ P/ n8 ~/ oI already loved you with all my heart
! o3 E  c  e1 d; OWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 j1 u4 k; v. f$ H& q& R. J; CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 N4 C' _$ M8 u5 zLove… just the word love
$ C+ e  Q. V  Q7 }8 g/ I, x1 KWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 r/ G' J6 B% Q. I) CI want to confess that I love you,
( Z; r8 B8 \; B' NBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. }* Y9 d& c7 g0 ^+ H1 \If today isn’t too late,
: Q2 q0 _1 n6 h" Q' fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 p7 Y. P1 Y; c( kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" |0 h( ~. Q% A  W7 B# k( TCan I entrust it to you?
+ U! o, c) f2 p* g1 W2 mEntrust my love within your heart
  \# \6 d$ k. L: G1 S+ ^; KLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ n5 Q1 I% I, ~$ COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  r! g) F1 v9 b/ u# vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ W$ X8 Q$ \6 m: D, TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. O; u! k% G8 Y) Y0 ]  h2 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- c+ h) u& @  _2 hEntrust my love within your heart
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3 e# `2 J8 [" }7 T[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 S5 y$ n0 j1 Y, |" F! u<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 {. Y- p; R2 Z9 K9 |0 Z1 K- p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' E8 `6 ^/ I4 A% T* x+ E$ }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, u8 ?) i. Y/ l* ?& ?$ M/ M! E, Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( R( V# H  ]+ u6 q9 z1 L% {7 C9 X  F) `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 l' d1 \: I) P8 Q# d4 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( B) ^5 B$ f3 g7 T6 `- q. Q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 z% P/ q) t. m0 G, `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ R* Q; `2 H0 L: C<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ g6 J' ~' r" z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' W! B$ P, P- p. }2 i; O% j<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 [% W) X0 ?; _8 L<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- b7 z+ p* j9 D: a: h<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! _( s5 y, V- c5 K/ s1 r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 C6 `5 x% t( {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) j1 Z  f* V3 ]6 o  C: K) p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 e  X" ]$ f8 W% @! T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, s' L5 h$ w% _( L* ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 r2 T$ v+ E% F8 s  P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ t1 S6 s7 y9 C" D* ]/ t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 p- w9 m* ^2 R1 n<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ k$ z  E  s/ z" y9 c" Z! L  k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" F+ u- H% T3 X! Q<P>But I never did </P>
% m  l# |1 v3 Z( P- P<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  u; D7 p$ n& l5 o6 k9 ^; g# Z% e+ w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# C  @( _3 `" L. i8 y* ]6 J& @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. a9 Z) |+ A( M# u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' Y4 T0 d. A- M; q  Z' O' s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ B& h" Z' ~7 |5 ~0 R) s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

" A0 Z& ?5 T) j7 o" _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# k- k1 O8 a0 ]<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ r) y9 U' X& ~* Q/ V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>