【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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1 y1 J! B7 |4 t6 i我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ Q9 g  x5 [& T- j8 o) dThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ P# b/ l* ]  i7 p  _  H0 n( _I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! r( u- \9 R+ d6 hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 X# Y5 B1 G. o$ G: }I would probably know how you feel
; ]7 c2 a7 ~4 I* b# w% `6 ?( r/ v: bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 D/ K0 c6 T! |I want to confess that I love you,
" b! \, Y1 W3 K9 @1 B% PBut I never did
" R6 e* h8 G2 j$ c+ hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 A9 h  w$ x% a$ UIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. @8 Y0 m' t- I2 ?Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 n; [* D& J6 ~1 }' lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( [6 @0 i! J- y" l6 ^0 h4 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 C* r6 V7 k0 {" Y; m/ S+ LCan I entrust it to you?
6 F6 V% k4 C3 k4 T5 ]! j5 ?Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. l# K( C+ b" tEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 y6 @% l  A0 c* U  n0 S
) T3 x' l$ o% |( E! Y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  z* x2 {  p! s, o9 P<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ A% \- u% J. c8 a# G<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ c% a: M' s* F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 J. f7 a! X( }1 j& F6 }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: d/ R! o; w3 P% G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% D, p/ J, B' p$ n9 _: H  _( F, x<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ s: E# o1 q  {5 ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* s& v8 L8 `. C/ _2 U9 U' R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 |. S* w' g! o$ \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 L, U, p; A/ ^& Y+ m4 V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
; M5 M9 F4 P& M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* H* G1 N1 [9 W; O' `4 m" g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 u# ~$ l* L- s7 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- Q& R; v' w, y1 O$ ?5 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- K* E0 I' T7 q( L  |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ W  b- |3 h4 [+ k6 A& N- C& A* P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 ^* I' m5 {; u0 L+ o7 }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! k- a+ k0 t' C& d  _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" g. t9 ~3 f5 a2 J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( q1 A' p$ y, l% [! c<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 N  F! d  m( h+ z8 ^- A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: O" a0 @! s. X. l- @/ Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ @$ y# ]4 ]4 k& B<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# _* _2 n! g9 x8 H* Y5 t<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( E' @4 p$ g& J5 M- T2 G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& l1 U% q3 P# F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& S: Z9 \$ S2 e, c! U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 s6 h( ?1 p( A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, `. b0 r% e# R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" S3 E& f9 q7 p" c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ v2 i0 Z& L' A& H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
2 u+ D: Q3 K: b! m. L, P) S
  d. y! ~* Z6 A. m* h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

; @0 H, \' ]0 f4 N& [* g  M* Z<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 Z4 k: w# `  g4 e1 p; |1 |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>